2.04.2008

real sweetheart

real sweetheart

"oh sure, they all are,"
- one black second -
match strike glance - a raindrop,
"when they want something."

smoke & spit; bluchers clap
like drunks at the derby
across slick pavement.

"time time time time,"
oh man - he laughs,
"it's a killer."

classically backward,
it begins again: a faucet
then - a slam, a breeze

.the door opens
my eyes up; a folder
thrown in the lamplight.
"outside?" - "let's step."

-one bottomless second-

"she used to be
a real sweetheart,"
I finally say.

1 cries of outrage:

leda said...

reading it again
i think you should lessen the words per line
a few are a little heavy
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